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oversættelses maskiner oversætter ikke korrekt altid, derfor ville jeg ikke råde dig til at bruge den.

Jeg kan prøve at komme med nogle rettelser.

My uncle and aunt live in an old house in Swindon. Every summer, as soon as the schol(1) is finished, we are hyrrying(2) to the station, take the first train and goes(3) out to them. They have a big garden; there is lot(4) of berries and fruits, and we enjoy the vacation there. On Sundays takes uncle(5) the old car, and he and one of his friends goes(6) out and play golf. Sometimes he gives me permission to let(7) come with them. He says that I play well, almost as good(8) as them.
When we are leaving home again(9), cries my aunt(10) - with happiness or sorrow? Nobody knows. My sister and I cry, because the vacation is over.

1. School ( stavefejl )

2. Are hyrrying - lang tillægsform + stavefejl- vi er skyndende

Det skal lyde ..... we hurry to the station.

3. Goes er 3. person ental, men i teksten er der tale om to piger, så det skal lyde ....a nd go out to them

4. Det skal enten lyde there is a lot of ....

eller ...there is lots of.....

5. ...takes uncle... forkert ordstilling

det skal lyde ...uncle takes

6. "goes" skal laves om til "go", da der er to mænd.

7. "let" skal slettes

8. Ændre "good" til "well"

9. When we go home again... eller when we are leaving to go home again...

10. ..Cries my aunt.... forkert ordstilling

Skal lyde ..my aunt cries..

Jeg håber du kan hitte ud af rettelserne. Du må spørge hvis der er noget du er i tvivl om.

Hilsen Maria

We are hurrying- we hurry. Undgå -ing former medmindre de er nødvendige. Danskere bruger dem meget- men ukorrekt, når de oversætter direkte. We hurry- vi skynder os- we are hurryring- vi er i færd med at ile/skynde os.

Sometimes he gives me permission to let come with them

Sometimes he let me come with them.

Goes- der er kun -s på verber i tredje person ental- he, she it- ikke i flertal they go

but he goes on the golf course.

My aunt cries- det andet betyder tante råber! Eller my aunt´ll cry. Hun vil græde. Men det første er nok mest korrekt. og hun græder OF- af- ikke med!

When we are leaving to go home. I forlader ikke hjemmet- I tager hjem.

Og Board the first train (det er bedre sprog- I stiger ombord i det- I tager det ikke bogstaveligt). Man kan også sige catch- We catch the first train. Det antyder måske bedre, man har travlt.

og lidt mere flydende, så du undgår for meget hakkende Danglish. Korreke oversættelser er ikke lavet ord for ord, men er når du får hele meningen med og får den formuleret på korrekt Engelsk.

My aunt and uncle live in an old house in Swindon. Every summer, as soon as school is out, we hurry to the train station to catch the first train to go visit them. They have a big garden with lots of berries and fruits, and we really enjoy our vacation there. On Sundays our uncle takes his old car to go play golf with one of his friends. Sometimes he permits me to come along to play with them. He says that I play almost as well as they do.

When we go back home my aunt cries with happiness or sorrow? Noone knows. My sister and I cry because our vacation is over.

Tusind tak for hjælpen alle sammen og fifne!
Det var en stor hjælp .

Når nu "let" står i teksten er det nok meningen du skal bruge det

Altså:

Sommetider giver han mig lov til (let)[at] køre med (come) og spille med dem.

Sometimes he lets me come and play with them

Det andet har de andre vist sagt