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 Er der nogle som vil rette mit engelsk?
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Dato:  27-09-2006 21:27

Hej.

Som overskriften siger, er der nogle som vil rette mit engelsk? Har nemlig ikke stavekontrol på min computer, og så er jeg ikke god til engelsk.


Away for the weekend


The listingtext is about a boy called Robbie who just is coming home from school. When he comes into the door, he calls his mother. She rushes out of a room
and says, that he must be quiet because the baby is sleeping.
Afterwards Robbie goes into the kitchen.His father is in the kitchen. His father says, if he is hungry, there is a sandwich on the kitchentable. Robbie takes the sandwich and begins to eat the sandwich. His father says that he isn´t allowed to eat the sandwich when he stays, he has to take a plate and sit down on a chair. Shortly after comes Robbie's mother into the kitchen. Robbie asks, if it is possible that he sleeps into the tent with his friend Clark, because he just has gotten a new tent .They want to sleep in the backgarden of Clarks. His
mother doesn't know what to answer, so she asks Robbie's father what he is thinking. The father says that he thinks it could be very
cosy. The mother says to Robbie that he don´t has some clean clothes, because she had no time to wash clothes, because she had to care of the baby the hole day.The baby was ill.Robbies answers, that he just can wear the same clothes he already was wearing.

His mother doesn´t know if she ´ll give ham permission. She says so to Robbie, that he always comes with something like this at the last moment.

Robbie doesn´t mind. Robbie tries to explain to his mother, that he will make it with the clothes he will wear, his fishing tackle and
a pair of swimming trunks. His mother askes him , why he wants
to use
a pair of tuckling trousers.Robies answer was, because they
´ll
go swimming in the river just behind Clarks garden.His mother thinks, it is too dangerous, so she tries to explain Robbie, .At the time she is looking for support by his father. Because his father don´t anwers at the first time, she speakes a little bit louder to him. He looks up from the newspaper and says, that Robbie has to get his pocket money just before he leaves, so he is able to buy aomething.





My summerholiday

In the first two weeks of my holiday, I was on the beach every day with my friends. We were on the beach in Kelstrup.

In the third week I drove with my mother and my sister to Germany on holiday. Every day were we swiming in a gravel pits or in swinning bath called "Bahia".

We made a lot of things every day. We were for example in Köln to see the Kölner Cathedral.
One day me and my sister were in Phantasialand with ours aunts Annette und Tina. Phantasialand is an amusement park in Brühl. We had a great day, and we almost tried all entertaiments. A few days later I was to baptism. It was my little cousin Hannah there should be christen.

In week 31 I was in ridingcamp with my best friend Tina. We were riding two hours every day. One day were we on an orienteering race. I was together with Pernille and her pony Silas. We had also a beauty-competition with the horses. I had dressed my horse like a ballerina. We had a week with lot of fun.

In the last weekend in my summer holiday was there summerevent in Vilstrup. The summerevent was from Thursday to Sunday. It was a very good summerevent.

That was my summer holiday.





* Kathrin P *
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Vejen som ikke starter i hjertet ender blindt

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 rettelser
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Dato:  27-09-2006 22:38
Her er lidt rettelser til første stykke. Der er ikke noget der hedder "listening text", så det har jeg erstattet med "piece". Du can også skrive "audio tape" (lydbånd), "audio piece" (lyd stykke) eller bare "article".

På trods af at have boet i england og Australien sammenlagt et år har jeg altså aldrig hørt ordet "tuckling trousers"... det ville jeg nok erstatte med "swimsuit" (jo, dette bruges også om badebukser) eller "swimmingtrunks"/"bathing trunks" Alle rettelserne har jeg skrevet med fed skrift :)

Næste stykke følger lige om lidt.

Away for the weekend


The piece is about a boy called Robbie who is just coming home from school. When he walks through the door, he calls out for his mother. She rushes out of a room and tells him that he must be quiet because the baby is sleeping.


Afterwards Robbie walks into the kitchen. His father is in the kitchen. His father tells him that if he is hungry, there is a sandwich on the kitchen table. Robbie takes the sandwich and begins to eat it. His father says that he isn´t allowed to eat the sandwich if he is standing up, he has to take a plate and sit down on a chair. Shortly after that, Robbie's mother walks into the kitchen. Robbie asks if he can sleep in a tent with his friend Clark, because he has just gotten a new tent. They want to sleep in Clark's back garden. His
mother doesn't know what to answer, so she asks Robbie's father what he thinks. The father says that he thinks it could be very
cosy. The mother tells Robbie that he doesn´t have any clean clothes, because she has not had the time to wash clothes, as she had to care of the baby the whole ("entire" kan også bruges) day.The baby was ill. Robbie replies that he just can wear the same clothes he is already wearing.

His mother doesn´t know if she´ll give ham permission. She says that he always comes up with something like this at the last moment.

Robbie doesn´t mind. He tries to explain to his mother that he will be okay with the clothes he is already wearing, his fishing tackle and a pair of swimming trunks. His mother asks him why he wants to use a pair of tuckling trousers. Robies answer is (du kan ikke blande nutid og datid sammen) because they´ll
go swimming in the river just behind Clark's garden. His mother thinks it is too dangerous, so she tries to explain this to Robbie. At the time she is looking for support from his father. As his father doesn´t anwer the first time, she speaks a little bit louder to him. He looks up from the newspaper and says that Robbie has to get his pocket money just before he leaves, so he can buy something.


Jeg må indrømme at jeg ikke ville have skrevet det på denne måde, men da jeg ikke har hørt det stykke I skal skrive referat af er det lidt svært at fortælle dig hvordan jeg ville have skrevet det- men det virker meget kluntet og "stykket sammen". Men videre til næste stykke :)




Skandinavisk PIGE med Skandinavisk HEST
Sådan skal det da være? :)

Nu med Tulle :)
Uden Stay (i et stykke tid...)
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 stykke 2:
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Dato:  27-09-2006 22:54

My summer holiday

In the first two weeks of my holiday, I was on the beach every day with my friends. We were on the beach in Kelstrup.


The third week, I drove to Germany on holiday with my mother and sister. Every day we were swiming in a gravel pit or in public pool called "Bahia".

We did a lot of things every day. We went to Köln to see the Kölner Cathedral, for example.
One day, my sister and I were in Phantasialand with our aunts, Annette and Tina. Phantasialand is an amusement park in Brühl. We had a great day, and we almost tried all the rides. A few days later I went to a christening ceremony. It was my little cousin, Hannah, who was christened.

In week 31, I was on a riding camp/holiday with my best friend, Tina. We rode for two hours every day. One day, we were on a orientation race. I was on a team with Pernille and her pony, Silas. We also had a beauty pageant with the horses. I had dressed my horse like a ballerina. We had a fun week.

In the last weekend of my summer holiday, there was a summer event in Vilstrup. The summer event went from Thursday to Sunday. It was a very good summer event.

That was my summer holiday.



Skandinavisk PIGE med Skandinavisk HEST
Sådan skal det da være? :)

Nu med Tulle :)
Uden Stay (i et stykke tid...)
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 ¤overskrift¤
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Dato:  28-09-2006 06:20

Tusind tak for hjælpen. Som sagt så er jeg ikke så god til engelsk, så det er kun dejligt at der er nogle som vil se mine fejl så jeg kan se det..




* Kathrin P *
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Vejen som ikke starter i hjertet ender blindt

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 kathrin-
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Dato:  28-09-2006 14:54
Jeg synes nu det så meget fornuftigt ud :) Det meste var jo gramatik- og opstillings fejl, og det laver alle

Så jo, jeg synes du er god til engelsk- og det rent tekniske som gramatik skal nok komme :)

Og jeg elsker at hjælpe. Så sig du bare til hvis der er mere!


Skandinavisk PIGE med Skandinavisk HEST
Sådan skal det da være? :)

Nu med Tulle :)
Uden Stay (i et stykke tid...)
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