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 JERES MENING TÆLLER!!
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Dato:  20-01-2006 11:46

i Engelsk fik vi besked på at skrive et lille brev til Anastacias kæreste(eks kæreste) og jeg kunne godt tænke mig at høre jeres mening om mit brev:


To Rob

It's not fair that you love me Rob, ad it's not fair that i love you, a small part of me at lest. But i also know that it could only hurt me more, and i don't want that. Why do i write to you? To tell you what you did wrong, and to try to prevent you from doing this to other girls. I think you need to here this-and
more important, i need to say this:

You never said the things that i wanted to hear when i needed them, and it is definetly to late now. Still-it's sad that i wasted so much of my time with you when we were never meant to be togheter.
If you would have just listened,you would have known that
i needed you to hold me and tell me that it was allright, that things would be okay, and that i didn't needed to cry. I had so many dreams, ad there wasn't a single one of them that you woren't in. Do you even understand how much you hurt me?

It's hard to put words on your feelings when there are so many of them, some of them i don't even know what meens. I think it's a mixture of both grief and relief. It's sad that i had to get so hurt, but it's sort of a relief to know that i don't have to wory anymore. So in a way.. Thank you.


Your beloved Anastacia.


THE OLD LAW ABOUT AN EYE FOR AN EYE LEAWES EVERYBODY BLIND

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 123456
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Dato:  20-01-2006 11:52

hejsa...


hmm nu kender jeg ikkelige så meget til hendes baggrund og hendes kæreste, men syntes det lyder godt, lidt sørgligt til sidst


man kan tydelig mærke hun blev såret...


ved ik lige om det var det kunne bruges...men jeg sytnes det lød godt


mvh anita

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 takker...
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Dato:  20-01-2006 11:59

Wee... takker, vi fik udleveret nogle tekster(sange) vi skulle forholde os til, hvor hun synger at han har såret hende... så det var mit bud på sårede følelser, men samtidig en stærk person...



TAKKER


THE OLD LAW ABOUT AN EYE FOR AN EYE LEAWES EVERYBODY BLIND

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 rettet
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Dato:  20-01-2006 12:27
Nu ved jeg ikke om du er interesseret i at der bliver rettet fejl i opgaven, jeg har desværre ikke tid til at gøre det nu, da jeg er på arbejde... Men prøv en gang at sætte din engelske stavekontrol på i Word! Der vil helt sikkert lige komme et par rettelser frem så. Men ellers lyder det meget godt!!!

Opstalding tilbydes ved Odder fra maj/juni 2006

8 km fra Odder, 12 km fra Skanderborg, 25 km fra Århus og Horsens. Se mere på præsentation.

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 stavekontrol...
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Dato:  20-01-2006 12:35
stavekontrollen har ikke brokket sig..

THE OLD LAW ABOUT AN EYE FOR AN EYE LEAWES EVERYBODY BLIND

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 lidt rettelser
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Dato:  20-01-2006 12:51

Hej Mudderbjørnen.


Har lige rettet lidt fejl:

To Rob,

It's not fair that you love me, Rob, and it's not fair that I love you, a small part of me at least. But I also know that it could only hurt me more, and I don't want that. Why do I write to you? To tell you what you did wrong, and to try to prevent you from doing this to other girls. I think you need to hear this-and
more important, I need to say this:

You never said the things that I wanted to hear when I needed them, and it is definetely to late now. Still-it's sad that I wasted so much of my time with you when we were never meant to be togheter.
If you would just have listened,you would have known that
I needed you to hold me and tell me that it was alright, that things would be okay, and that I didn't need to cry. I had so many dreams, and there wasn't a single one of them that you weren't in. Do you even understand how much you hurt me?

It's hard to put words on your feelings when there are so many of them, some of them I don't even know what mean. I think it's a mixture of both grief and relief. It's sad that I had to get so hurt, but it's sort of a relief to know that I don't have to worry anymore. So in a way.. Thank you

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 Lige en lille rettelse mere
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Dato:  20-01-2006 13:00

togheter = together

definetely = definitely

listened,you = mangler mellemrum


Opstalding tilbydes ved Odder fra maj/juni 2006

8 km fra Odder, 12 km fra Skanderborg, 25 km fra Århus og Horsens. Se mere på præsentation.

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