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Hyggesnak

 Mit digt.. hvad syntes i?
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Dato:  24-12-2008 11:09

Ja som overskriften siger har jeg skrevet et digt og ville lige høre hvad i syntes...


how can you live your life on a lie
how can you will love me till you die
when i hear you calling her late at night
and i see you walking out on me, in the shadows off the light

you make it hard for me to stay by your side
but i was the one who said yes to be your bride
i know i should, but i won't go
'cause in my heart i still love you so

i try to smile when you come home late
you say "i was just out with a mate
i forgot to call, please don't be mad"
and all i do is try to hide that i'm sad
'cause i know you were with her for a while
i can see it in the way that you smile

when i make you stay here with me
you always have somewhere els to be
and when i finally make you stay at home
all you do is stare at your phone
waiting for that call from her
and ending the call with "yes i'll be right there sir"

you get up so fast, and i hear the slam off the door
and i feel like i can't take no more
you are out so fast, wihtout even giving me a kiss
that is just one off the litle things i miss
like the stars in your eyes i used to se
when we were lying in bed and you were looking at me.

I bet she says "it would be easier wíthout your wife"
well, i was the one to whom he devoted his life
he said yes to me in fron af family and God
who would know he could be that kind off a fraud
it seems i wasn't that long ago
i was the one he wouldn't let go

i know now that this is the end
there are no moer days her for me to spend
i can't believe that this is what i'm saying
but i can't take another evening alone, crying
i'm going to call you and tell you what i know
and i will try not to let my feelings show

i pack up all my things and sit by the phone
looking around on what used to be my home
i'm thinking about the things we used to do
back at the times when it was just me and you
and i think to my self just before i make the call
it is better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all...


stave og grammatik fejl er gratis...




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 super godt....
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Dato:  24-12-2008 14:33


Jeg synes det er super godt - håber ikke for dig at det er din egen historie du har skrevet...


Umiddelbart synes jeg ikke de første vers svinger så godt som de sidste...


"Ingen hest har græsset forgæves" citat: Steffen Brandt

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Nu med en ny heste-ven... Thorleif Gøgholm has arrived..


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4.6.1997 - 11.7.2007....R.I.P.

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 den er god
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Dato:  27-12-2008 23:00

Hold da op den er god,den er godt bygget op, god dybtet i teksten, bliv bare ved

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 mvmdhg
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Dato:  28-12-2008 01:42

Wauw! Du er sk*idegod til at skrive digte! Er du prof. eller noget? Ej, hvor er det smukt, men en trist historie.. =)


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